Comments on: You Were There http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/2009/01/08/you-were-there/ the day-to-day account of a girl and the guys she encounters Fri, 27 Nov 2009 17:47:10 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Dean http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/2009/01/08/you-were-there/#comment-34 Dean Thu, 08 Jan 2009 16:55:43 +0000 http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/?p=425#comment-34 Miss, Please pardon my uninvited intrusion into your busy life. I only wish to take a moment of your time to tell you that your writing and the heart it comes from has captured me. Poetry in particular encompasses a corner of my heart like no other literary form. Indeed through poetic verse it is possible to glean if only a glimpse into a writers heart. As another disciple of Christ, I find it refreshing and rare that a modern woman in times such as these proclaims her beliefs so eloquently and unashamed. Thank you for your obedience and unwavering faith. If I may, I would like to continue to visit your site on ocassion and perhaps we could talk more if you feel comfortable with that. Nonetheless, it was a pleasure to make your aquaintance. Respectfully, Dean in Florida Miss,
Please pardon my uninvited intrusion into your busy life. I only wish to take a moment of your time to tell you that your writing and the heart it comes from has captured me. Poetry in particular encompasses a corner of my heart like no other literary form. Indeed through poetic verse it is possible to glean if only a glimpse into a writers heart. As another disciple of Christ, I find it refreshing and rare that a modern woman in times such as these proclaims her beliefs so eloquently and unashamed. Thank you for your obedience and unwavering faith. If I may, I would like to continue to visit your site on ocassion and perhaps we could talk more if you feel comfortable with that. Nonetheless, it was a pleasure to make your aquaintance.

Respectfully,
Dean in Florida

]]> By: Aaron http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/2009/01/08/you-were-there/#comment-33 Aaron Thu, 08 Jan 2009 15:32:37 +0000 http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/?p=425#comment-33 This would make an amazing song. If you were credited, would you be ok with letting us use it? Edited to this: You were there When I didn't know where to turn You were there when I knew I had a lot learn You were there When I couldn't figure out why You were there when all I could do is cry out to you You where there When I lost the fight You were there when nothing seemed quite right You were there When I was down and depressed You were there when I badly needed rest In you You were there When I let you down Never leaving, You always stuck around You were there When I thought no one cared And my actions appeared so visually impaired to you This would make an amazing song. If you were credited, would you be ok with letting us use it?

Edited to this:
You were there When I didn’t know where to turn
You were there when I knew I had a lot learn
You were there When I couldn’t figure out why
You were there when all I could do is cry
out to you

You where there When I lost the fight
You were there when nothing seemed quite right
You were there When I was down and depressed
You were there when I badly needed rest
In you

You were there When I let you down
Never leaving, You always stuck around
You were there When I thought no one cared
And my actions appeared so visually impaired
to you

]]> By: Janna http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/2009/01/08/you-were-there/#comment-32 Janna Thu, 08 Jan 2009 07:47:32 +0000 http://singleinthecirclecity.wordpress.com/?p=425#comment-32 That's a nice but yet a little bit sad poem. Just found your blog and will dig in to it. // Janna That’s a nice but yet a little bit sad poem. Just found your blog and will dig in to it. // Janna

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